martes, 23 de octubre de 2007

Formula 1

The most pupular autosport in the world is the formula 1, this is an elite sport and where millions of dollars are played by winning a competition, to drive Formula 1 car has to be a unique experience, The amount of money invested in this sport is amazing, Ferrari has a budget of 750 million euros. Last Sunday was the final race in Brazil, Interlagos, After 21 years, three pilots arrive with chances of obtaining the title. These were Lewis Hamilton (107 points), Fernando Alonso (103 points) and Kimi Raikkonen. (100 points), The greatest chance of winning the title had Lewis Hamilton.

The way it came out was the pilots:
1 Felipe Massa
2 Lewis Hamilton
3 Kimi Raikkonen.
4 Fernando Alonso

The start was spectacular, after an error of Hamilton in the first corner he fell to the 10th place, while Massa was leading most of the race, Ferrari's strategy was the best, Raikkonen finished first, followed by Massa and Alonso third, Kimi Raikkonen won the 2007 championship with a difference of 1 point over Hamilton. This sport is spectacular.

1 comentario:

Thomas Youman dijo...

Hi Juan Fernando,

Your article is very interesting, I also like Formula 1 races and I hope I can go to one of them one day. In your writing, sometimes you confuse putting the present instead of the past. I corrected your article and I will be like this:

The most pupular autosport in the world is Formula 1, this is an elite sport and where millions of dollars are played by winning a competition, to drive a Formula 1 car has to be a unique experience, The amount of money invested in this sport is amazing, Ferrari has a budget of 750 million euros. Last Sunday was the final race in Brazil, Interlagos, After 21 years, three pilots arrived with chances of obtaining the title. These were Lewis Hamilton (107 points), Fernando Alonso (103 points) and Kimi Raikkonen. (100 points), The greatest chance of winning the title had Lewis Hamilton.[Photo]
The way it came out was this:
1 Felipe Massa
2 Lewis Hamilton 3 Kimi Raikkonen. 4 Fernando Alonso
The start was spectacular, after an error of Hamilton in the first corner he fell to the 10th place , while Massa was leading most of the race, Ferrari's strategy was the best, Raikkonen finished first, followed by Massa and Alonso third, Kimi Raikkonen won the 2007 championship with a difference of 1 point over Hamilton. This sport is spectacular.

You can check your errors and republish your article and then it will be in the top 5, I promise.

Thanks,